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16
2012
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Writing > Improving Sentences

Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  

Because it lacks water, this makes the area known as Death Valley a desert, but it is by no means devoid of life.

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Hint

Ask yourself, “What makes the area known as Death Valley a desert?”

Question of the Day

Can you answer today's question?

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6/1

Nov
16
2012
268,165 responses
Question of the Day Statistics
Number Answered
Correct 164,744
Incorrect 103,421
61% correct

Writing > Improving Sentences

Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  

Because it lacks water, this makes the area known as Death Valley a desert, but it is by no means devoid of life.

Answer Choices

Answer

Choice (E) is correct. It avoids the awkwardness and wordiness of the original by making “Lack of water” the subject of the sentence.