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2014
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Writing > Improving Sentences

Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  

Being that she has a gift for comic timing, Esmeralda is a natural when it comes to storytelling.

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Hint

Remember that unnecessary words can be deleted.

Question of the Day

Can you answer today's question?

Register Next Tests:
12/6 , 1/24

Nov
20
2014
33,650 responses
Question of the Day Statistics
Number Answered
Correct 20,522
Incorrect 13,128
60% correct

Writing > Improving Sentences

Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.  

Being that she has a gift for comic timing, Esmeralda is a natural when it comes to storytelling.

Answer Choices

Answer

Choice (C) is correct. It avoids the unidiomatic phrasing and wordiness of the original by replacing the unidiomatic participial phrase “Being that she has a gift for comic timing” with the more concise and idiomatic prepositional phrase “With her gift for comic timing.”