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SAT Writing Practice Questions
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2. Expressing ideas logically
| Writing Problem | Sentence Illustrating the Problem | Should be... |
| Coordination and subordination | Tawanda has a rash, and she is probably allergic to something. | Tawanda has a rash; she is probably allergic to something. |
| Logical comparison | Nathan grew more vegetables than his neighbor's garden. | Nathan grew more vegetables than his neighbor grew. |
| Modification and word order | Barking loudly, the tree had the dog's leash wrapped around it. | Barking loudly, the dog wrapped its leash around the tree. |
3. Being clear and precise
| Writing Problem | Sentence Illustrating the Problem | Should be... |
| Ambiguous and vague pronouns | In the newspaper they say that few people voted. | The newspaper reported that few people voted. |
| Diction | He circumvented the globe on his trip. | He circumnavigated the globe on his trip. |
| Wordiness | There are many problems in the contemporary world in which we live. | There are many problems in the contemporary world. |
| Improper modification | If your car is parked here while not eating in the restaurant, it will be towed away. | If you park here and do not eat in the restaurant, your car will be towed away. |
4. Following conventions
| Writing Problem | Sentence Illustrating the Problem | Should be... |
| Pronoun case | He sat between you and I at the stadium. | He sat between you and me at the stadium. |
| Idiom | Natalie had a different opinion for her. | Natalie had a different opinion of her. |
| Comparison of modifiers | Of the sixteen executives, Naomi makes more money. | Of the sixteen executives, Naomi makes the most money. |
| Sentence fragment | Fred having to go home early. | Fred has to go home early. |
| Comma splice | Mary took time out of her busy schedule to visit her aunt, John decided to continue working through the summer. | Mary took time out of her busy schedule to visit her aunt, but John decided to continue working through the summer. |
5. Recognizing Effective Writing
| Some sentences require students to recognize that there is no error. |